I am deep and distinctive red flowing from the veins when oxygenated
A square thats equal yet parallel on all sides
The thunder before the rain swells the earth all around
Proud as a leopard, stealthy and deadly to my prey
Simple yet complex when lyrics are dancing around in my head
Forever young when 21 is yet to come
The core of existence, the very fabric of time
Vintage worn out love seat filled with memories never forgotten
Music for the heart and soul
Italy where romance and fine cuisine brings beauty to the eyes Fire smothering the decay of the old and bringing anew
Forever lasting oak tree with bark telling a centuries old tale
A heart restarted, a gasp for a breath
I am life reborn
I love this, very interesting.
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery.
My favorite line is:
"Forever young when 21 is yet to come".
Not sure why...probably because it reminds me of my favorite store, Forever 21. :P
Really good use of words dude. I like the line:
ReplyDelete"Forever lasting oak tree with bark telling a centuries old tale."
It's really descriptive and makes you think about the past.
In the words of Borat: Very Nice!
Wow! This poem was amazing. I relly like yur descriptive words. My favorite part was when you talked about Italy. Ive never been there but the way you tak about it it seems like you have. Good job.
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